ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Description
Another sunset while walking, this is at the top of my street,
which I thought went well with a friends poem and a song I heard
in a film I was watching -
Edited - it was darker so a touch of lightening the shades
was added so to see the fields better...
The Weepies - Same Changes - [link]
Walking
by Charmaine aka
Walking – Head bent in contemplation
Hoping for profound inspiration
Wishing for the thoughts to come
Adding up ones life in a sum.
Thoughts alluding, feelings prevail
Flooding your body like a wind and a gale
Feelings of hatred, of pain and despair
Mixing with love, kindness and tenderly care.
The storm within raging - forces so high
Ripping your soul with a scream and a cry
wishing you could choose which one will reign
as cavernous feelings drive you insane.
A potent desire for logic and reason
But these emotions keep adding their treason
They won’t let you think, judge or assure
For such abysmal feelings there just isn’t a cure.
Normal – or so people tell you to be
But most of society just doesn’t see
How your feelings extend and persist
Until the end where you stop to exist.
Poem with permission -
for any fav's in advance I am so behind
which I thought went well with a friends poem and a song I heard
in a film I was watching -
Edited - it was darker so a touch of lightening the shades
was added so to see the fields better...
The Weepies - Same Changes - [link]
Walking
by Charmaine aka
Walking – Head bent in contemplation
Hoping for profound inspiration
Wishing for the thoughts to come
Adding up ones life in a sum.
Thoughts alluding, feelings prevail
Flooding your body like a wind and a gale
Feelings of hatred, of pain and despair
Mixing with love, kindness and tenderly care.
The storm within raging - forces so high
Ripping your soul with a scream and a cry
wishing you could choose which one will reign
as cavernous feelings drive you insane.
A potent desire for logic and reason
But these emotions keep adding their treason
They won’t let you think, judge or assure
For such abysmal feelings there just isn’t a cure.
Normal – or so people tell you to be
But most of society just doesn’t see
How your feelings extend and persist
Until the end where you stop to exist.
Poem with permission -
Walking Walking – Head bent in contemplationCheck her wonderful gallery
Hoping for profound inspiration
Wishing for the thoughts to come
Adding up ones life in a sum.
Thoughts alluding, feelings prevail
Flooding your body like a wind and a gale
Feelings of hatred, of pain and despair
Mixing with love, kindness and tenderly care.
The storm within raging - forces so high
Ripping your soul with a scream and a cry
wishing you could choose which one will reign
as cavernous feelings drive you insane.
A potent desire for logic and reason
But these emotions keep adding their treason
They won’t let you think, judge or assure
For such abysmal feelings there ju
for any fav's in advance I am so behind
Image size
2048x1536px 1.02 MB
Make
NIKON
Model
COOLPIX L120
Shutter Speed
10/4000 second
Aperture
F/4.9
Focal Length
27 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Mar 20, 2012, 6:14:54 PM
© 2012 - 2024 BrightStar2
Comments40
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Lovely and quite unusual colors, Donna.
And thank you for sharing some beautiful poetry as well.
And thank you for sharing some beautiful poetry as well.